Read the following exam question and the student's response. Apply the assessment criteria and discuss the marks that you would award the script before reading the examiner's marks and comments. How different were your marks and comments from the examiner's marks and comments? What improvements could be made to this student's response, in order to achieve better results?

Essay question: Storytellers often play a role in the credibility of their story. Compare how two works establish credible or incredible stories through reliable or unreliable narrators.