Persepolis and The Bluest Eye
Read the following Paper 2 essay question and the student's response to it, which was written in 1 hour and 45 minutes. Apply the assessment criteria and discuss the marks that you would award the essay before reading the examiner's marks and comments. How different were your marks and comments from the examiner's marks and comments? What improvements could be made to this student's oral, in order to achieve better results?
Essay question: In what ways do two of the literary works that you have written act as a voice for the oppressed?Student Response
Examiner's comments and marks